What do you think of my latest Harry Potter fan fiction?

Posted on January 21, 2010 by admin

http://www.life-after-harry-potter.com/fanfiction/tfr/page1.html

This is *really* short. You can leave comments here or at the e-mail given at that site. Please provide *specific* criticisms of this story – I really want to improve it if I can.

Thanks,

Jim

I liked it lots. =]
I knew from the beginning it was Luna, though. x)

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3 Responses to What do you think of my latest Harry Potter fan fiction?

  1. Sabby says:
    January 22, 2010 at 4:35 am

    I liked it lots. =]
    I knew from the beginning it was Luna, though. x)
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  2. ♥HP_Fanatic♥ (is back) says:
    January 22, 2010 at 5:03 am

    To be completely honest, I really liked it!

    When I first stopped reading it, I thought to myself "did she ever convince the eagle knocker?" and then I though "well, he didn’t ask her a tough question next, which he promised to do if she proved herself wrong, so she must have got it."

    The entire time, I was thinking "this is so Luna Lovegood!" and I was right, yay!

    I truly believe that it was similar to something JKR would have wrote.

    Great job, you should write more, and if you have any others, send me links!! I love fan fics. Oh, and if you find any good ones (even if they aren’t yours) can you send me links?
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  3. Ginny says:
    January 22, 2010 at 5:11 am

    That was great! I love Luna-centric fanfics! You’re interpretation of Luna was one of the best I’ve read in a very long time. Bravo!
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